I hav just started to begin my thirty day challenge and I think that I'm doing quite a good job on it. My thirty day challenge is write a 5page novel(FANTSY GENRE), no sugars(JUSTT COOKIES AND CAND STUFFS), using my morning wisly(STUDYING) and no yellow card(in case that I'm participating on GlPS camp) and no red cards.Untill now, I've gotten 3green cards, no other bad things.
I wish that this challenge would end succesfully.
FINAL ESSAY ASSIGNMENT
12년 전
FIX:
답글삭제line 2: write -> to write
line 2: no sugars -> not to eat much sugar
line 2: justt -> just, cand -> canned (spelling)
line 2: stuffs -> stuff
line 2: using -> to use
line 3: wisly -> wisely,
line 3: no -> not to get, take out "no" before "red"
line 4: Untill -> Until
line 4: take out "no other bad things"
Do not use too many parentheses(). It makes your writing confusing. Be a little bit more careful with spelling mistakes.
I'm glad that you have no bad cards and only good cards. Keep up the great work!