2013년 1월 14일 월요일

Adora Svitak TED response essay

     Hi everyone ^-^ today I'm going to write a response essay of Adora Svitak's TED presentation, < can kids teach adults>?
   I watched a video in MR.Neil's class a TED video, it was a presentation about could kids teach adults, Adora starts her presentation with saying that childrens hear the world 'childish' a lot, but she disagree with the  definition  with saying that    childrens have no responsibility  with the events, it's all the adults who made those crisis. Adora keep saying her opinion that  the teacher should not be the center of the class and  teacher must teach children something and students must teach the teacher somthing.
  I agree with her opinion, well some people would not believe in this, but I think that students have strong creativity which can be really usefull in the life, for an example, as the Adora Svitak has said, there is a museum in the Washington and childrens can freely work with the glass and the artist who are living in the museum can get the ideas by looking at those glass sculptures cuz that childrens do not think that glass designing will be hard to do.
 For addition I think that maybe it's not the matter of doing that adults are better or childrens are better, but all of them are  just equal, the reason why we are getting teached by teachers is just because they know something that we do not know so I think that students should teach their teachers what only themselves know and teachers must teach the students whatthey know.
     In conclusion I think that we should  treat both specices of human equally so that both must get mutual profits.

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  1. Please check your spelling and word use. For example, "cuz" is not a word, and children and adults are not different "species".

    Please make your introduction and conclusion paragraphs fuller.

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